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Great start! I hope you write more =]

I put the story on a bit of a fast-forward because I’m still not sure what to put in the middle. So some things might not exactly make sense. the ...

Hey Misty! This was a great piece of work! The only thing I would of done is add more filler and description =]. Hope you write more

idk...i was bored so i decided to post an essay i wrote a year ago My Theme When I turned seven, I remember getting a flyer from school for piano ...

i edited it hopefully and added some filler, I hope it's enough :) constructive criticism please =] When I got to Belliveau, just from the looks of it, I knew ...

their cd's pretty good i think the best songs though are: ( 02 ) The Only Difference Between Martyrdom And Suicide Is Press Coverage ( 03 ) London Beckoned Songs ...

I get it now! Lol. I had to go back and reread it. Very good, can't wait to read the rest!

I loved it, some spelling errors but everyone makes mistakes =] Hope you have more to add!

I'm having trouble getting the story going, I've been writing for 2 years now and I have no idea where it's going its written in parts, so it doesnt flow...this ...